or find similar with horizontal lines – or rotate:

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Activity

Directions: With your partner, brainstorm three words or phrases to describe each person. Then follow the directions below.

example:

a good friend
good listener doesn’t judge peaceful

A good teacher

A successful studentĀ 

A poor teacherĀ 

A poor student

My ideal friendĀ 

My ideal life partner

Next, write a sentence to describe each person, using parallel structure. Try the example sentence with your instructor first.

Parallel structure helps to make our writing flow. When we use parallel structure, our writing becomes clearer and more effective. Our readers can easily “go with the flow,” rather than having to work to navigate through our sentences.

 

 

creek in between mountains covered with pine trees at daytime
Photo by Ivana Cajina on Unsplash – lost url

 

creek in between mountains covered with pine trees at daytime
Photo by Jon Flobrant on Unsplash

 

 

 

Which river looks harder to navigate? You want to give your readers a smooth, straight pathway to follow with no bumps or turns to distract/discourage them.

 

 

https://www.evergreen.edu/sites/default/files/writingcenter/handouts/grammar/parallel.pdf

https://webapps.towson.edu/ows/moduleparallel.htm

 

https://courses.lumenlearning.com/styleguide/chapter/parallel-structure/

 

 

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